When I crave for solitude
My soul walks
Towards that old creek
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I lie in his arms
Looking at our reflection
Shine in the waters
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PS: Thank you for your encouraging comments on the
previous Haiku post. Here’s one more attempt. I loved this prompt. Linking it to
Carpe
Diem #494, Creek
previous Haiku post. Here’s one more attempt. I loved this prompt. Linking it to
Carpe
Diem #494, Creek
The creek is a great place to enjoy solitude and relax. I'm imagining the sound as I read. I think that here, "In lie in his arms", you meant "I like."
janet
Hey Janet, as I wrote this, the sound f water soothed my aching heart!
And thanks for pointing it out, it was, "I lie'
Happy blogging
Gayu
What a serene scene you have painted here with your haiku. Thank you for sharing.
Wow, thank you for the lovely words of encouragement! Glad that you liked it Thank you so much!!! It makes me attempt Haiku even more!
never alone when we walk beside the waters of the aged creek.
Delightful Haiku!
Lovely words Moonie. there is a strange sense of peace when we are besides water, isn;t it?
Thank you for stopping by Moonie!
Writing Haikus is very challenging to me. Loved both of them. First one is my fav
You have a lovely haiku touch there – very nice visually and emotionally.